When I think of you

When I think of you

I hear your voice by my ear

That’s when I remember your smile

And the love resting deep in your eyes

I will remember the whole story

Every night spent sleeping beside you

The softness of your warm skin

And time seems to stop just for me

You rescued me from the world

Held me close and stopped all my worries

So when I think of you

I hear your voice and my heart is at peace

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Beautifully expressed, a true love poem in the old tradition

You rescued me from the world
Held me close and stopped all my worries
So when I think of you
I hear your voice and my heart is at peace

Those lines are incredibly constructed and so intensely sincere ..

Thank you for sharing.

[Paza]

"the love resting deep in your eyes" ... I love that line. Eyes, for me, have always been the first thing I notice about someone. You can see so much in a person's eyes...and to see love there is the best of all possible feelings.

[Komichi]

I know how that feels. When you think of a favorite person, you can't just feel one thing about them...it's like domino effect or "if I give a pig a pancake" effect...lol Sweet poem!

[Orlando Murcia]

A very peaceful way of showing
your love and thoughts towards
your one and only

Great job!

Orlando M

[distefano 401]

beautifully written. very emotional. nice write!

[dodger blue]

thanks for the add & yeah this definately sounds like work from someone drenched in love.
hold on tight. congratulations.

it was nice & smooth...well written...i could almost hear my lovers voice.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Sounds like love to me. Well written.