When I think of you

When I think of you

I hear your voice by my ear

That’s when I remember your smile

And the love resting deep in your eyes

I will remember the whole story

Every night spent sleeping beside you

The softness of your warm skin

And time seems to stop just for me

You rescued me from the world

Held me close and stopped all my worries

So when I think of you

I hear your voice and my heart is at peace

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Beautifully expressed, a true love poem in the old tradition

You rescued me from the world
Held me close and stopped all my worries
So when I think of you
I hear your voice and my heart is at peace

Those lines are incredibly constructed and so intensely sincere ..

Thank you for sharing.

[Lady Insomnia]

I love this piece. it reminds me that love can still be the very air you breathe and not just silly dreams made up by poets. The emotion feels real.

[Emma. :)]

Amazing. A true expression of the feelings you have towards the one you love. I espeacially like the line "And the love resting deep in your eyes". Great. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Really great work on showing just how divine love can feel... such a beautiful piece of work.

[Matthew V. H.]

This was truly amazing. You could feel the love in this poem. Honestly feel it. Your emotionpours off the page and directly into my heart.

thank you for sharing something so personal.

[flash68lb]

Cherish the moment that brought these words forth.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful, moving piece filled with the joy, peace, and depth of love. Wonderfully written and vivid in each brilliant phrase. Incredible!

Craig

[Damien Dsoul]

It is tranquile and very much sure of whom it's directed at, and why. This ought to be plastered inside a Hallmark card.

[The Tao of Bri]

This is True Love...intertwinign of two souls, two wholes surrendering themselves to each other in the Light they make! Beautiful!

[run vs remember]

Really good, very easy to read. The last line closes the poem really well.

[Gordon]

I agree with Paza, the line "the love resting deep in your eyes" is the strongest line. As a matter of fact an entire poem could be written about it. But I like the poem, it's an easy read and an emotional song from the heart.