My lacy bra that's red

My lacy bra that's red

A Poem by Kat-Marie Berti

Boy, you knew exactly what to say
In order to get your own way
You never see farther than my looks
Or care that I like reading books
All you want is me in bed
To see my lacy bra that's red
You never worry about the next day
All you do in life is play
The world is made up of more
Than sexy babes, bikinis and sandy shores
So if you ever really want me
You have to know more than ABC

© 2008 Kat-Marie Berti


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Even though i am a male, i speak this whole heartedly.

GIRL POWER!!!!

the sexiest thing on a woman is her brain. Red lace helps but i think it would look funny on glasses... anyway. This is something every girl, teen, woman should tell herself when her b/f is pushing for sex.

keep up the good work and preach sister!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love it! : )

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent. In defense of men, we have to deal with girls who DONT read books or care about the world. So you should not be so presumptuos in thinking that we dont value you for intelligence, I think every man worth his salt wants a chick like that, but just remember that we have to get our needs met, and asking a girl about the last essay she read or the last poem she wrote is not a priority simply because it is a rariety. Educate the masses and maybe it will change. ; )

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like you want him to accept you for your mind, but he's still able to manipulate you and get your body. Which one of you is winning?


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

looks aren't important to me. a lot of guys say that, but i mean it. i want someone i can have a real conversation with. i can't stand girls who think paris hilton is a good role model and that "the hills" is the best drama on television. oi vey.

you seem like a smart person. :-) i'd like to have a conversation with you one day.

(i thought i'd share this: one night i used a pick-up line on a girl, something like - 'would you like to come to my place and take a look at my plato?' har. har.)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YAY!!! someone who's honest. yay for you

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh snap! This is perfect! Absolutely perfect - the last line brought it all together!
(What? A woman with brains? It'll never catch on!)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Great write, Kat.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol i wish ALL females thought like this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Kat-Marie Berti

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