My lacy bra that's red

Boy, you knew exactly what to say
In order to get your own way
You never see farther than my looks
Or care that I like reading books
All you want is me in bed
To see my lacy bra that's red
You never worry about the next day
All you do in life is play
The world is made up of more
Than sexy babes, bikinis and sandy shores
So if you ever really want me
You have to know more than ABC

Reviews

[Matthew V. H.]

Even though i am a male, i speak this whole heartedly.

GIRL POWER!!!!

the sexiest thing on a woman is her brain. Red lace helps but i think it would look funny on glasses... anyway. This is something every girl, teen, woman should tell herself when her b/f is pushing for sex.

keep up the good work and preach sister!

[Laura E. Aranda]

CUTE! I wish people I knew (aka my sister!) felt this way!!!!! haha...Take care and cheers to you! Lea

[emmajoy]

I have a feeling that the majority of women would like to be accepted for who they are, what they feel, rather han for their looks. Trouble is those wonderful creatures called men expect the frame that goes along with the painting and there are quite a few females that enjoy the viewing lol

You've written a great poem, really reached for the words and said what you think and feel within the confines of a few very well constructed sentences, phrases.

Thanks for sharing.

[Jacob Winfield]

I prefer intelligent, witty girls over dumb fashion models. You strike me as an intelligent girl. Intelligence is the sexiest thing, in my opinion�

[Mark Salinger]

I've been dating since I was 15 � so that would be about two years. I've been with three different girls during this time, and none of them showed signs of being intelligent. They were more interested in fixing their hair and ogling over the Jonas Brothers to care about important things. So I give up � for now, anyway. I know there are girls out there who are smart, who are well-read, but I haven't been so lucky in finding them. Fiddlesticks.

Good write, but not all men are interested in lacy red brassieres. I promise you.

[Al]

A nice poem. I like how it portrays that beautiful woman, maybe even known as sex symbols, can be intelligent just as much as anyone else.

[O!]

A woman with a body and brains!!....yes...somehow the men think we're only body!!...

U go girl!!! Teach them Respect!

x,
O!

[Penny Ellen]

I usually hate so much rhyming, but this was just so light-hearted and filled with self-worth. Love it!

Penny

[wett ink]

you have a raw, unadulterated way with expression. are you writing a book? you should.

[FRANK]

This is a very moving poem because it expresses a woman's desire to be accepted for who she really is. In my opinion, we all want to be accepted and loved or who we are and not how good we look physically. Yet, we all stuggle with our sexual desires too. Perhaps, it is best to say that we are seeking "intimacy" - both emotionally and physically.

Looking at Alexander's comment. I must admit that I, too, need a woman who is intelligent. Yet, I can't stand egotism and a "know it all" attitude. I don't like to hear an opinion on everything from a person - female or male. I love modesty. Intelligence shows without being forced. I think that it is important to be both intelligent and modest.

My Aunt Mary graduated from high school with the highest GPA in her class. She is extemely intelligent, but she never told us that she was the Valor Victorian of her class. My grandmother was the one to brag that up. I learned that my Aunt Mary chose not to mention her honors for intelligence because she didn't want the children in her immediate and extended families to feel the need to meet that expectation. She is still so kind and gentle. She seems to recognize the importance of that.

For me, intelligence in a woman is a must, but I don't want that at the cost of her kindness. I'd rather have kindness above all else. I also crave a woman "intimately." Sex without intimacy breaks my heart. It always will.

Frank