Ecstasy

The feel of his hard body against mine

Sends shivers up my spinal cord

Every kiss he plants upon my neck

Makes me want to cry out in ecstasy

As I dig my nails into the skin of his back

He lowers his mouth over one breast

I arch my back and moan by his ear

He senses the passion erupting like a volcano

We are lost in each other’s taste and touch

“Don’t stop baby”, until we are both satisfied

 

Reviews

[FRANK]

I agree... This poem certainly teases for more. I appreciate the approach that you have taken with this piece. In my opinion, writers often try bring eloquence to their descriptions of love-making, but in truth, love-making is raw in nature. You approach the act of making love directly with this piece, and in doing so, you come across as very believable. I like that. Excellent work...

Frank

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

Quite erotic.

[eric mccarthy]

great. now i have an erection. this makes me wish i was in a relationship. oh, well. fantastic write. good work.

[Moods]

Delectable, moistens the senses tastefully. You have a stoftly sensual style that is refreshing.


S

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

mmmm a very sexy prelude to one wild night... a very yummy piece.

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It teases for more.

[doreen cyr]

very passionate write
doreen