Oh Julien

I’ve observed you from a distance

Never had the guts to tell you

How breath-catching you are to me

I feel weak whenever you come around

I’m scared to say (I know its cliché)

That I’m so in love with you

I fumble with my words so nervous

Yet you just smile at me so calm

I used to see right through you

Never noticing you where there

Yet now I crave to be with you

I want you to be mine for life

I’ve never told a soul about this

I’m much too chicken to try

So I’ll sit right here and watch you

Hoping one day you’ll come to me

 

Reviews

[Moi]

Ah! Darling, what good is love if you don't act on it? The poems from a while back, but I hope that you've done yourself some poetic justice and clubbed him senseless with love.

As for the poem; it was good. But if you edited it, you could no doubt wow him, let alone woo him. I think some issues arise with your use of yet -- perhaps omitting one or the other could help. They seemed too close together, unless you wanted that kind of repetition.

Keep writing, and most of all; keep loving.

[Elliana]

That's very beautiful Kat. Who was it from, if I may inquire?

[Ray Hamilton]

This was touching I think you should let him know how you feel
Life is short you should live it to the fullest
I enjoyed this write Ray { Not a Poet }

[Breeza]

Tell him it could be the best thing you'll ever do! Now I need to take my own advice. xx Love your poem

[sutoraika]

very sweet. unrequited love is fascinating. or love unnoticed.

[Suki]

ooh i know exactly how you feel... :/