This Silly World

This world is so silly

I do declare

These people are chilly

I hate the way they stare

I wonder what they want

And what I’ve done?

Do they want me to flaunt

Or dance under the sun

Well I’ll do what I please

They won’t control me

I’ll throw away my keys

I just want to be free

 

Reviews

[Lalli]

be free! be free!!.. as it is not a right, but an entitlement!

Good write, keep expressing your thoughts and sharing the emotions of your body. I will be reading more

a suggestion, maybe the word "creepy" would work better than "chilly".. it will still keep your rhyme scheme.

much love n respect

-Lalli

[ANNA]

Wonderful write. You expressed the word Free in your own way. Love it!..Be free because if you can't, they will try to control your soul.. So dance your freedom to the sun...Keep writing your messages
Well written!

Much love,
Anna

[huma]

Dance!!!
please

[djeehc09]

Great poem! Says it as it is.