Dangerous Man

Dangerous man, with your dark past life

You never tell me more then I need to know

But I crave to hear of who you are

The things you’ve done before you met me

Tell me, explain to me, read me your story

Let me lay by your side as you recount it all

Dangerous man, I fear you, yet I fell for you

Your heart tells of many secrets

I wonder, I dream of who you might be

But I want to know your version, the truth

I’m waiting; it’s your turn to talk

Dangerous man, fill me up with your words

 

Reviews

[robin]

The fire of dark and evil potential is an intoxicating addictive thrill that questions us but does not freely give details of it's own tale...it stays hidden in your ignorant assumptions until you reach 20/20 hindsight...really fun statement and kind of rubic's cube like in a small set of phrases...

[That Weirdo You Just Mi..]

I really like this. It tells of the mystery a man can behold. I love it. Peace to you and the world. Will's Gurl

[flash68lb]

I like this, though I would have to say I'm just a little bias, some would say from my checkered past, I'd prefer to call them life lessons, the hard way. Anyway, very inticing.

[gemma]

i think this is really good ive had probs with guys like this they wouldnt take wouldnt tell me anything until i learned the truth from someone else you captured it all

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Intrigue is a doorway to compassion, albeit a secret one! It maybe wise to avoid the answers and enjoy the moment!

Sensually provocative and creative write!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

[MerelyPoetic]

oh how I love this piece. it's so great. excuse my lack of upper case...i'm a bit stoned from my pain meds. i have always been drawn to the bad boys, and my current man falls under that category. this piece is delicious as fear really adds spark and excitement into the mix...and if there is any hint of passion...these things serve to elevate that even further. i, too am interested in the inner workings of men's minds, hearts, souls. i hope you get the answers you crave. i can picture you laying in wait for them, good imagery. i think my fav line is the last. bravo!!

[Michael]

Even when you know the heat is there, you still have to touch the stove. It is our nature, after all. Very good job with expression. Reading between the lines, you leave the reader wondering what dangers lie within you.

[Enigmatic Amor]

Aw, a woman's curiosity with the wrong man. Nicely done. :)