Wonder

As I lay in bed in the dead of night

I wonder about you and if I’m right

What you think of during your day

And if I was with you, what you’d say

If I’d kiss you, how that would make you feel

If you’d tell me your heart would be mine to steal

Or if you would shrug and say it’s not much

All the while never loving the way I touch

I wonder about so much, about who you are

And if your body and soul holds any scars

Were you ever in love? I want you to tell me

Don’t be afraid, I will never turn around and flee

No matter what you say, I will always love you

I made a commitment in my heart and I’ll stay true

My word isn’t always any good, what a shame

But this time it’s engraved in gold with our names

So let’s enjoy life, I’ll be waiting right here

Just let me know as soon as you get near

 

Reviews

[Nithin.R.S]

Nice,when in love ,there are so many nights where the sleep just doesnt come so easily.the mind gets engaged with the thoughts about the lover.The wonders or say thoughts like what if i was there,is always so beautiful to think.An imaginary world where one lives a life with the hope that it will become true someday.The way u presented ur wonders are good .i wish that your hopes will turn brightful someday.

[Symfony of Words]

wonderful!
if you have ever been in love, this poem really takes you back to what its like to lay there at night and wonder what they think about, and how they feel about you.
i really loved it!

[An owl on the moon]

Such beautiful movement in your words, from the solitary darkness of night to the golden promise of eternal days together. So well done and emotionally vital. Brilliant!

[Nely Amorim]

very optimistic, but stealing a heart isn't necessary if the feeling is mutual :) i'm sure it is.... i enjoy your writing, it's always so varied and each piece is unique :)