Used

I waited for you every hour of every damn day

But you never gave a s**t; I was simply your prey

 

You used every ounce of me, sucked me dry

Looked away whenever you heard me cry

 

I meant nothing to you; it’s all falling in place

You went at your own pace, skipped first base

 

When fun was not fun anymore, you left me

And you thanked God to be gone, you were free

 

But you were the problem, you were the flaw

You got rid of me because I didn’t follow your law

 

I wasn’t good enough in the end, you got bored

Just stupid excuses, you were good at those, Oh Lord

 

I have no clue what to do; I’ve given up on love

But maybe God will one day send me my white dove

 

Reviews

[J. Marc]

Well, first of all, one must tell about the incredible energy that is seen in this poem. I guess it translates your true feelings and experience that's why it appears so real. As for the content itself, well, the least I can say is that one should not give up on love but rather use it to cure from all the previous wounds, as a tool of rejuvenation and appreciation of life...again! How could you not inspire love any more........?!

[Cece]

we need to see what to do
time for revenge

was not good enough for you
revenge should be sweet

how they feel to be shamed
revenge will be exact

[David Young]

Some guys can be real a******s. Men SUCK.

Nice poem.