You're gone

The years have come and gone so fast

My time has vanished before I’m ready

To capture memories and make then last

 

I don’t want to regret anything about you

Our love was strong and seemed eternal

Lasting forever, every day feeling like new

 

But now you’re gone and won’t come back

At night it’s hard to forget and fall asleep

Without thinking of all the things I lack

 

I know it’s over between you and I

The lies and heartbreak are officially over

And now it’s time to sit and cry

 

Reviews

nice rhyming,good rhythm,I can relate.

[Tyler James]

its simple and it works, though a little heart-wrenching with the context...sit and cry indeed!

[Everything Happens For ..]

a nice rhyme scheme really allowed this poem to flow well

the simplicity of this poem makes it great and relates to the subject

well done, its a very good write =]

xxxxx

[The Elder Pine]

Indeed they do. It is nice to see a rhyme scheme. I think that you used it well and it did add something to your piece. I look forward to reading more from you soon.

-High Road

[Forest Green]

Invisible lines bring real sadness sometimes. Once they're crossed there is no going back or so it seems.

Whether crying or pounding fence nails is the result...it's all the same really. Nothing makes the pain go away but time...and something or someone new.

Honest and believable peom.

Good Work!

Daniel

[None]

Screw him! He's probably a jerk. Don't blame yourself. He wasn't right for you and there are TONS of guys out there waiting to meet a poetess. You really go through each emotion so well and this is very touching. Awesome poem!

[Cece]

my veneer is tarnished
i caused it i'm to blame
now everyone knows my name

one person in life to understand my pain.
someone who'll let me shed a tear
someone to say have no fear.

[Wanda S. Paryla]

The saddest loss of all is that of love. You have expressed it beautifully here. The lines are fluid and it flows wonderfully. Good write!!

[Allyson N. Jason]

This is very haunting and I could relate strongly to the emotions expressed. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece.

[Bear]

for sure~ to sit and cry, let it all flow out of you so you may pull yourself up and begin traveling on in hopes that another will cross your path and enter your and start to fill your heart. Write your way through the pain and lonely times, it'll help and one day in the future you may read over your words and be pleased to see how far you ventured. Fine poem, thanks for sharing!! Bear