My fragile heart

My fragile heart

A Poem by Kat-Marie Berti

If you break my fragile heart with your smile

Aimed at some other girl with a sexier style

Rip my soul to shreds with your sinful gaze

Wanting everyone but me, what’s this craze?

I’m not saying I’ll hate you, that’s impossible

Just that I’ll never love again, is that possible?

 

© 2008 Kat-Marie Berti


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Such a deeply honest, and emotionally expressive piece! There is both a sadness and an underlying tone of anger that fills each line. Well done...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gawd i hate it when that happens =(
this poem can relate to about every girl lol
great job .

keep writing. keep being inspired.

-BL00DY-K1TTEN




Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wish I could say that I could not relate to this piece...but sadly I can. Your words are powerful and poignant. Excellent write!

Nicole

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and sweet.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Writing about pain, and love, are my biggest inspirations. I just loved the way you wrote it. Although sad, beautiful.
Astonishing write,
~Rob~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have felt like that girl you wrote about. I can relate, to this powerful wrie. Thanks for showing that we are all the same!

Sandra K

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very powerful..made me think. but very sad. nice poem :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was good. short and to the point, and you can never go wrong with that. very sad.

Posted 16 Years Ago


To the point with style...............cool.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So short, yet containing so much. Beautifully written, nice flow. I enjoyed it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kat-Marie Berti
Kat-Marie Berti

Nostalgic, Canada



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Writing has been my escape since I was a child. My mind is busy working on my latest novel and I also try to find the time to write every single day. Some of my favourite authors: Stephen King, .. more..

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