Sweet words

Lean in, Baby, hear my voice

A clean whisper in your ear

A mumble of sweet words

A shiver runs up your spine

You feel me so near to you

Wishing you were closer to me

My cheek against your chest

I hear the thudding of your heart

Racing, racing, racing so fast

 

Reviews

[Glenn McCrary�]

This poem kind of turned me on a little bit :) but I like the way you expressed your emotions well done :)

[poetsblade]

well written...clear emotion...good job

[w. r.]

yes, please! hehe. nice write.

[Dead Monster]

I love it
so passionate and tempting

[*** Hey Jude***]

Your expression through words is excellent, I can feel the atmosphere you have illoustrated. Very nice! ~ Jude :-) xo