Regular Teenage Life

My life like other kids is pretty cool but has it's up and downs but i like my life. I have two sisters one  name is lillyan she is five years old the other name is jillyan she is two.They sometimes annoy me but i love them anyway they are funny and make me laugh. I also like hanging out with my cousins like Donovan hes cool but still gets on my nerves sometime. But me and him love videogames we both are very good at playing videogames. I also like hanging out with josh he is a football player he also plays baseball they both are very fun to have around. I go to my dad's house every two weeks actually two weeks ago we went to Sea Side Heights in New Jeresy. My dad like playing videogames to with me and my sisters he really is a cool dad to have . I know it might seem like i have a good life well it is but it still has its disadvantages but it's good for me. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[The Wave]

not bad. but definitely needs some work.

it seems very amateurish because the sentences aren't structured properly and there are some spelling/grammatical errors.
the sentences also didn't seem to be in order. you went from one topic in the beginning, to something else, and back again to that same topic. it would have been okay if there was a point... but it just sounds like scattered thoughts.

overall, its really not so bad. a free-write can actually bring about great writing. so hopefully this is the start of amazing pieces.

good job.

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

now thats cool u should write this as a diary.and u shouldn't jump from topic to topic and then back to the first topic.