First love

Baby hold my hand, let's take things slow 

Just setback hold on tight and watch our love grow

I wanna steal a kiss on your cheek 

Then slowly watch our love reach its peak

All seemed so sweet but it was all left behind 

These were words and memories from another time 

Once we had the world to gain

But in the end all we we left was the pain 

You and I came to a sudden crash

We saw our dreams and our future burn to an ash

The fire of our love just burnt too fast

Oh well this was left somewhere in e past

Now I can see a bright future in her eyes

Our future together lives and it thrives

But once again thanks for the wine and the stain 

All of the wisdom you let me gain

Now it's time for a new life to start 

And although I've moved on, you are my first love and will hold a special place in my heart.

Reviews

[TheDuchessDiary]

Though the message is quite heavy, I felt light while reading it. I also like this line, "Now it's time for a new life to start". Life goes on and we must keep moving on :) *Thumbs up*

[Sami Khalil]

The fire of our love just burnt too fast...
Well penned