Hun..

In these past few days we've grown closer

and I'm glad your right here by my side

hope we can be together when were older

and I love that I can call you mine..

 

you know your the best thing thats happened to me

I love how stupid,wild,crazy,or even serious we can be

babe,I love being able to hold you under my arm

and I'll do what I can to keep you out of harm

we both know how much we've been through

I just need you to know how much I love you

mrs you're everything I can ask for and more

I just never thought I'd meet a girl like you before

everyday that goes by i love you more and more

cuz.....

 

These past few days I've felt we've grown closer

and I hope we'll still be together when we're older

for now I'm glad your right here by my side

and that right now I can say that your mine

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This was so sweet and caring.. so full of emotions and yearning! I hope she knows what she means to you.. it would be sooo sad if she didn't hear it or feel it.. there's no price to that kind of feeling! I loved the flow.. rhythm and meaning.. just divine to share such a thing with others.. declaring your love in writing is worth so much more than anything in this world... hope one day I am lucky enough to have that! Keep it up.. I truly enjoyed it! =)

Wow, this is so sweet and loving.

....I really like this write, so wonderful.

[..R.I.P..]

aww that was so sweet! i loved it! hopefully you and Ruth stay together for a very long time! great write!
btw....HI!!!!

[OutToLunch]

wow, that was really good! keep writing!

[ajasminewallflower]

AAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! That is soooooo cute

[Nish Nish the Fish]

awww i wanna cry!
this was SO sweet, this girl should be honored to be in a relationship with a guy like you!
a very VERY beautiful caring and sweet tribute to the one you love.
can't wait to meet the person that makes me feel like this :)
well done!

[Nick Almanza]

Great poem dude, as always i liked the flow that emits from it, the soft feeling , kinda fuzzy idk i dont know haha but yeah dude its great =D