Love story

part1 guys POV

As I wrap my arms around her perfect hips
I turn her around to kiss her sweet lips.
She has both sugar and spice
everything about her is just so nice
Well when I'm with her,
everything else is just a blur
she's always doing something crazy to make me laugh
nothing else ever goes right, but being with her is more than enough
before she came along I had lost fate.
That all changed when we startes to date
ever since then our love has been growing strong
because when I'm with her nothing ever goes wrong.
Our love is a fire that will never go out,
because love is what our lives are about.
She's the umbrella that covers my pain
he protects me and helps me avoid the rain.
She's always there and keeps me near
she's always been there to help me conquer my fear
our love is so special because of its strenght
not like most who measure love by its lenght

I still remember that one passionate night
both the moon and stars were shinning bright
It all started with that rose
and a small peck on her nose
I gave her a surprise when she was in the shower
boy did she love that beautiful flower
that night we stayed up watching the stars
and i pointed out mars
while looking up at the sky, I took one big sigh
then I started to cry
I just started to melt
as I was telling her how I felt
how I still feel
and she should know my love for her is real
Its just that she completes my life
I think I'm going to ask her to be my wife
but I'm too scared of getting rejected
I don't want our relationship to be affected
not after all we have been through together
I hope our love can last forever
because when my skies were turning grey
she showed up and made everything okay
and she keeps making things better everyday
everyday with her is a big thrill
and she'll be there tomorrow. I know she will.
One day when we were really close I decided to propose
I was still scared i would get rejected
but luckily she accepted
and gave me a big long kiss
feeling her small sweet lips can make any guy bliss
boy did that change my life
knowing she would be my lovely wife

Reviews

[mmzx]

this is super duper sweeeeeeet (!!)
hahha.
thank you for your review.
your poem is so cool,
great job.

:D

[..R.I.P..]

AWWWWWWWWW!!!! HOW SWEET!!!!
Sorry, but I thought it was just so sweet. It was well written and full of emotion. I loved it and I'm glad everything worked out between yall.

[Nish Nish the Fish]

AWWWWWWWWWW :)
SO ADORABLE!
haha sorry for that...
but seriously, it was so cute, and half way thru i thought it was just one of those typical love stories...but something just compelled me to read, i tihnk it was ur very original word choice. im glad i finished reading, because it was so sweet and honest and lovely ;]
im glad things worked out for ya!