How does he match up next to me?

How does he match up next to me?

A Poem by E-man

so how does he match up next to me?

don't lie to me, I know you want me to be like he

and now that he's here right now

will you forget all about me?

I know he is better

so just forget about me

you know that I love you

but there's not much I can do

I would never want to get between you two

I'll have to forget you, not much more that I can do

don't lie. You compare us

but just tell me

How does he match up next to me?

 

© 2013 E-man


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I have felt your emotions in this writing. This is a good poem, and I know it is harsh to know someone that doesn't love you back. However, you will find the right girl

Posted 15 Years Ago


Whoever that guy is you're better than......she doesn't deserve you, you can do so much better than her. Letting her go is all you can do, but in the end it'll be the best thing for you. This is an amazing piece. I loved it, I can relate to how you felt. Great write.

Thanks for sharing.
~JaniK

Posted 15 Years Ago


oh wow. this was amazing. i've felt what you felt in this poem. i've been compared to that other girl, and faced the harsh reality of having to let go and the feeling of being inadequate to the person i thought i loved. very touching. bravo.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was actually a really good poem. Its really sad whenyou fall for someone thats in love with someone else.May I also emplore who this person is?

Posted 15 Years Ago


may i know who u were refering to?

Posted 15 Years Ago


I know. .u are better. .its crazy. .but maybe we are the same. i dont know

Posted 15 Years Ago


How does he match up next to me?

wow ... the question is the answer.
very nice your diction, sep jez !

Posted 15 Years Ago



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E-man

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