That Letter

Today I picked up your last letter
still unopened in that small red envelope
I wonder if it makes things worse or better
Does it crush me?Or give me hope
I wonder but I still don't know
and everyday my temptation will grow

I still don't know what's inside
is it just writings or memories?
our memories seem like one big ride
just you and me ignoring our enemies
or does it say how much better you can do?
and telling me how much he loves you
are you trying to tell me that everything will be okay?
or do you just want to ruin my day?
I understand you love him now
just tell me how
How does he match up next to me?
how much better can he be?

today i picked up your last letter
tore open that red envelope
I know it can make things better
i opened it but will it give me hope?

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Well very emotional write.. to receive a letter and not open it.. you will never know now will you? Suspense but not a very happy ending.. if it's bad news you can walk away... if good your heart will be set free.. either way you will need to find release from some point.. if they are writing you then there must be something there .. some reason other then just to torture you.. like a sign maybe.. that is complicated as then they could also be your enemy just trying to continuously get even.. which does your heart tell you it is..??? I say just rip it up... and move on and be happy.. if they loved you then they would grab you wouldn't they.. for what circumstances would make them do this to you either way.. maybe the letter is an explanation .. could keep going with this! Great write.. it'll be interesting to see if your heart allows you to keep opening letters.. Smiles =)

[..R.I.P..]

Wow....that's really deep and raw. Really good.
Hey, what was written in the letter?jw.

Thanks for sharing.

[ajasminewallflower]

Thats actually really deep. I liked the fact that you made the envelope red like it could mean love or doom to oneself...

[ruth]

emman... wow.
hey..
wat was written in the letter?

[Nick Almanza]

dude. .awesome. .i wanna know whats inside that letter. but most likely u wont wanna talk bout it eh i dont blame you i would do the same thing. hmm but great write man