father

Father i wish you were here
that way u can hear
that last night was the last time you'll make me shed a tear
the only f****n way u control me is by fear
when u die i might even cheer
but if I'm still alive when you die
trust me I won't even cry
who did my mom go of and wed?
she'd be better of with someone who was dead
my dad is such a b***h
i swear he should have married a witch
you lost my love
you lost my respect what else did you expect?
but i hope you end up in heaven
cuz 4 not loving u im burning in hell
but satan will b abetter guy than you
so dont ask about my dad, my dad who?
but hes my father
that frekin sux hard
both for me and my brother

Reviews

[Pratibha]

Oh My GOD, someone is filled with so much anger...I can understand this because I have seen so many kids and teens in Canada suffer because they have nobody to turn to...this is indeed sad.
As Parents, GOD has bestowed this sacred responsibilty on our shoulders to nurture a young mind and soul....and when we forget that, where will the kid go?

[ajasminewallflower]

Well I can fully understand this poem to no exent. What I've noticed about your writing is that you never try to cover anything with like an image or a symbol. You know what you should try for your next poems. Try putting in an image for the reader to try and figure out because not only is your writing extremly raw, it also has a sense of mysteriousness that people want to hear or read your next poem and I think that doing that would increase your air of mystery.