Soldier of passion

Kiss me sweet, kiss me tender for the light is quickly fading

 Soon our time will be spent and our moment lost

   So here i beg you to delve into the passion of our very souls

Once so shy in this world, with you my love i feel so free

 Heart pounding with excitement as you explore my body with knowledgeable fingers

 As you press soft moist lips upon bare skin i feel like a goddess that you worship

 Unique i feel in this space of time for ordinariness has vanished with one steamy glance 

You smile down at me as we embrace like so many have in the past

Yet, as breaths mingle  and eye lids lower i know this is better than them all

Night now almost over our love still burns, more brightly then ever before

For more love and passion is poured forth than any other could

 A savage need grows as the years of agonizing fear and loneliness melts on our heated skin

Tears fall down my face as the sky brighten in the horizon for our time has drawn to a close

 Screams rip from my already worn throat as loving eyes filled with defeat gazed upon me

 The  time has come our passion still there is torn apart as you vanish in the distance 

Darkness cloaks me with depression as fear consume me while i wonder if i will ever see my love again

Author's Note

I wrote this for all those people that had to see their loved ones leave for any which reason..... I my not have felt so many things yet in life for my life has still many more years to come, but i feel connected to this some how.
Thanks for taking the time to read this.

Reviews

[CaSi]

nicely written full of passion, i can definitely relate i moved alot and left a lot of people I've loved

[Southern Cross]

To say goodbye to someone we love is difficult enough. Mix this with uncertainty and a longing fills every inch of our hearts. The content you presented here was beautiful and captures this fear , love and passion all in one poem. I found the form with the indention a little distracting though. Perhaps you could edit the form and the flow would seem more magical..Just a thought..I hate to change anyone's perspective on what they write as we each have our own unique styles. This piece shows great promise all it seems to need is a little tweeking.

[Melody]

I don't think I can think of one word to describe this. It's nicely written, great job V.J.C

[Cole Hayley]

Very well written, very bittersweet. I can see the raw emotion you put in to it. Very well done.

[Harley (arbiter)]

This was pretty good. Awesome work. Everyone can relate in a way

[Wild Willow Blue]

I do as well. I have a great friend who went through this and I felt like she would have been happy with this piece. Very well written.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I can see the actions unfold in my mind. A bitter/sweet unitly of the many Soldier's wife that relive this moment in their minds.