Fully nothing

Stop and then start, once started take a moment to stop and admire.

Days pass by in a lazy blur, time means little to all of us.

 Sitting or standing does not matter, why would it matter?

Ask me a question and i will have a few for you.

 Staring up at the morning sky, admiring the sights all around.

Time passes and changes come, unwilling they may be but it happens none the less.

 Here it come, the thing you have been hiding from all these years.

Sneaking up on you ever so quietly, you never had a chance.

 Decision are coming, the time is near for the last leaf has fallen and the cold is here.

 Your dread is palpable, not that anyone expected less.

All gather saying their goodbyes, telling you not to fear for they will be back next year.

 As they disappear in the darkness of the night fear grips you once again.

They may never come back you think, you turn and look behind you.

  A sense of foreboding is in the air, the cabin so dark and lonely you dread.

Alone at last was what you craved, now that you have what you wish it is no longer desired.

 Cold and alone you wish for some one to come and stay with you every day.

Laughing echoes in your ears of the memories past and you remember why you came.

 Solitude is safe, love is risky and dangerous at that.

Loving some one could end up with you dead, so keep safe in your cabin in the woods.

 Safe in natures arms is where safest you will be, away from the pains that others can cause.

Still as night turns to day and sleep has yet to come you wonder if true love will ever come.

Reviews

[Brittany]

I see two sad themes here. Saying good-bye as in graduation or moving can be sad, but at the same time can open new doors to new friends and experiences. And isolation can be just as painful as heartache. Just my opinion. Can't let rule your life - I think this is what you're trying to say.

[Matty Bosox]

Very twisted which makes it strikingly interesting...I for one am not the biggest fan of poetry but this one is a head turner....Being alone is the biggest fear anybody can ever experience, yet you hear so many say they want it...Especially more impressive is the wording experience for somebody so young...I have seen alot of that on WritersCafe...I'm 33 I feel like an old man LoL Since it kept me, a non-poetry fan, interested is very impressive..

[V.J.C.]

The reason you see two themes is because my mind wonders and tends to not stay on one direct path...