My child

 

 

Tenderly,

I look upon you.

so innocent,

of this darkened world.

Your cry,

resonates throughout me.

 burdens heavy,

I carry for you.

Harsh world lightened,

by your care free smile.

gently kissing you upon the cheek,

world brightens for a moment.

weights of life,

lift with the sight of you.

For my love so freely given,

I will protect you always my child.

Reviews

[Loner]

Short and sweet .......

[Gothic Girl]

this is a very beautiful poem. this is simply beauty at its finest. nothing is more beautiful than to hold a new a life in your arms. greatjob! :)

[Laura Maidah]

I hope this is about a cute baby. This poem is very cute.

[Daithos]

love it. this is amazing. the short simplicity...it just....rings out, with pure emotions.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

AWWWWW!!!! this i so excellent and sweet! It brings on a certain nastolgia and sweetness. It also has really good rythm! congrats on writing such a nice piece of literature!

[Pax]

beautiful and sweet tribute for the children's of the future.
good job

[felioness]

The beauty of this poem is marred by some glaring grammatical errors. You should fix them up so it shines the way it was meant to shine.

[L. Edward Neale]

Awww. They just make your heart melt don't they. Ditto to that. Very touching!

[Alistair (Ali)]

Gentle contemplation, thoughtfully expressed.

[Tomi]

Beautiful, so innocent, so kind! Love it!