My child

My child

A Poem by V.J.C.

 
 
Tenderly,
I look upon you.
so innocent,
of this darkened world.

Your cry,
resonates throughout me.
 burdens heavy,
I carry for you.

Harsh world lightened,
by your care free smile.
gently kissing you upon the cheek,
world brightens for a moment.

weights of life,
lift with the sight of you.
For my love so freely given,
I will protect you always my child.

© 2012 V.J.C.


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I love poetry about the love of a child. I can actually imagine my own kids as I read this...kissing them softly upon their little pillow cheeks that feel like plushy marshmallows. I imagine holding them as they sleep, probably one of the most comforting moments of being a parent. Nothing beats the feeling of having a child fall asleep upon you. You never stop being a parent, either. Even after they turn 18 and are out the door. That's what resonates with me about this poem: the last line. 'I will protect you always my child.' because there is no doubt within my mind that a parent will always parent their child, even when they grow up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is a beautiful little poem. There is something indescribable about children - especially when we are new parents.

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is great...a great promise to a child.

Posted 12 Years Ago


terrific poem that encapsulates the feeling of parenthood perfectly

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so true at what children can do... good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


So sweet and touching. A child can bring so much light into a dark world.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nicely done. I love how every interaction with the baby brightens an otherwise darkened world.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful and full of emotion. Excellent job capturing the love of mother for child! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


The beautiful bond between mother and child is well expressed here. This poem radiates love and nuturing and the desire to protect our children from what can be a very dark world. Nicely written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful little expression of love and hope. nicely done.


Posted 12 Years Ago



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