heart still strong

Waiting for so long,

my love still strong.

for you,

only for you I wait.

Years are passing by,

my heart still sky high.

life is hard,

without you my love.

Growing and aging,

my dreams weakening.

my love is still strong,

hopes cling on.

One day passes,

then the next.

hoping and praying,

for you to come.

My prince,

a warrior so strong.

comforting embrace,

I need right now.

So here I sit,

in the cold.

hanging on,

to a whisper and a dream.

Rain pours,

washing away the hopes.

For the whispers,

nothing more than a delusion.

You hadn't cared,

forgetting me in a blink of an eye.

Loving another,

while my own heart wilted.

So here I sit,

heart no longer strong.

attempting to regain,

something.

Lost I have been,

too long.

Without you,

I had stood strong.

shakily,

but still standing.

so I must mend,

 my bleeding heart.

For hope,

is a potent antidote.

bringing life,

once more to me.

no longer am I weak,

for now my heart is strong.

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awwww. this is so saddening... it seemed so happy in the beginning... but you show the strength of a heart that has been cut... Yes.. hope and the sunshine for the future will make a woman's heart grow stronger! This was very inspiring for me. For, i can relate to the pain very well. Thank you for sharing this. =)

[Destinyxi]

Sad poem, but really deep and filled with emotion. Nice write!

[Legolas]

This is so strong! Reminds me of the song 'Stronger". The emotions flow through this poem very very well. Wonderful job.

[Pencrafter]

One of the most common sources of pain is the loss of a loved one, especially to someone else. But life goes on and somehow we must continue. Hope spurs us with courage; maybe someone else will fill the void. Your poem seems to be speaking of these things.

[Rhea752]

sad beautiful well written!!! keep it up

[Tunder]

The first stanza really captured my interest. Your poems all have a beautiful rhythmic quality them. Keep up the good work!

[afra]

aww sad but beautiful ....good job

[Skye]

Wow, beautiful to read.I love it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to wait for love. Time become a pardner of sadness and memory. I like the strong and honest emotion in the poem. In time like in your words. We must get up and go forward. Thank you for sharing the amazing poem.
Coyote

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

Oh my dear wonderful writer...you skill is driving to a higher level! Well done!