dark angel dull point

In the process of slowly moving just came ac ross this old journal entry

Dark Angel Dull Point 

Dark angel, dull point, with your warm black embrace

you seem strangely holy inside my heart at times

You singing so soft & lovely to me in my dreams late at night

Now Its time please let me go, I know you have never strayed 

 Always in my ear, quiet please, at least let me attempt to be me

Cant spin out over you, done being true to you ,.. and only you  

Your voice wakes me at dawn when i dont give you what u want 

 Ok one last warm black embrace strangely holy inside my heart 

I am leaving first thing tomorrow its time to love you from a far

So  just in case i dont see you thank you You shared with me Everything that a masquerade parade is capable of concealing 

Thank you for loaning me that blanket to cover my insecure fears

Mostly I want to thank you for how to shed a real true tear    

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

This was beautiful and I could really relate! :) As I read this, I couldn't help but smile because each line hit home and was what I was feeling emotionally. I had a tough day and having my boyfriend cancel plans on me once again made me realize how my feelings should really be steered. I cried a bit, which I believe shows that I care about him, but yet, inside I am angry because of how I constantly put in every ounce and time of my effort to him, yet he can't bother to keep plans in check without having to cancel because something else had come up. I may be a patient woman, but after being treated like how I have been, I believe it is time to put my foot down and tell him straight on what I am thinking. How I am feeling and that if things don't change, then some other things will.

[Rayree Parker]

THANK-YOU-for reading it responding :) wow i can see how this poem could relate to what u just described... For this to make you smile when u are having such a shithole day ...i feel literally honored and warm in my chest....idk sounds like u had a rough day for-sure.... one thing u wrote really caught my attention ...... that u believe its time to put your foot down tell him straight on what you are thinking and how you are feeling ......you should practice these things always in a calm matter of fact way everyday !!! He needs to know if his actions or words are causing hurt .. then if he still does it and shows no empathy in my experiences with this sort of thing it always just gets more and more painful more toxic full of resentment and the only good thing that comes of it is for me some things to write about but they dont feel good till way later ....hang in there my friend u are a amazing soul dripping with talent !!!! ty for ur truth tonight

[I Am Svetlana]

You are welcome for my honest words, dear writer :) The "old" me would simply let his actions slide and not make a huge deal about it, but lately it has become such an issue that the "new" me needs to be honest with him and tell him what is wrong. We have had such a discussion before and he seemed to simply brush off what I said. Sure, he says he knows and understands, but I am truly wishing he takes adifferent approach with his actions since he doesn't seem to be taking my asking and warnings seriously.

[Rayree Parker]

key words there different "approach with his actions" dont settle for lip service :)

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Good poem! Very well stated!

I like your writing style. I can tell that your words are conceived from pure emotion. You don't restrict your poems to lines structure that just sounds good. Just pure emotion and that's what good writing is all about my friend!