pretty pretty girl

pretty pretty girl

A Poem by fen
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girlhood

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pretty pretty girl,
this isn't a love letter,
this isn't a worship prayer,
this isn't fair play;

pretty pretty girl,
things aren't getting better,
they're just a little clearer
if you look at them this way;

pretty pretty girl,
you have been lied to,
there is no heaven or hell,
there is no place for you;

pretty pretty girl,
you have been a fool,
do you realize now?
the mirror was just being cruel;

pretty pretty girl,
silly little thing,
daughter of a brutal world,
bearer of the eighth sin.

© 2023 fen


Author's Note

fen
i didn't really have a clear idea or objective while i was writing this. how does it make you feel?

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Interesting. Makes one think

Posted 1 Year Ago




Now read twice and on reflection, I think you may well have something here .. such a pretty little treat for my mental muscle .. Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on August 30, 2023
Last Updated on August 30, 2023
Tags: poetry, girlhood, prayer, religion, feminine, drama, love, selflove, identity

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fen
fen

Spain



About
20 y/o writter with too many thoughts in her head and emotions in her heart. i mainly write about love, heartbreak and identity, and i don't know why but i have a weird tendency to mention dark the.. more..

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