Fen,
Romance is actually made of gunpowder, it used to be made of swords and knives, but we are so much more advanced these days... But it will always be deadly, Keats wrote eloquently about it in La Belle Dame Sans Mercy... The problem is, all people want to do is just target practice.
Posted 11 Months Ago
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11 Months Ago
hi Vol, thank you so much for this. it's a very interesting metaphor and i completely agree with it .. read morehi Vol, thank you so much for this. it's a very interesting metaphor and i completely agree with it :)
Fen,
Romance is actually made of gunpowder, it used to be made of swords and knives, but we are so much more advanced these days... But it will always be deadly, Keats wrote eloquently about it in La Belle Dame Sans Mercy... The problem is, all people want to do is just target practice.
Posted 11 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Months Ago
hi Vol, thank you so much for this. it's a very interesting metaphor and i completely agree with it .. read morehi Vol, thank you so much for this. it's a very interesting metaphor and i completely agree with it :)
Crazy. Ironic at the surface level. The subject of this poem is clearly in a real dilemma.
But there are questions like "who owns that gun?"
"What if it actually belongs to the victim and he trusted the other guy only to find himself at the tail end of the barrel?"
Why is the would be killer after him? Is he after his money, information or after his life! Or is it a vengeance mission?
Why is the protagonist so cooperative? Has he done something really bad and now an overwhelming sense of guilt makes him want to embrace a form of euthanasia at the end of a barrel?
Of course I don't know. But this piece raises all these questions and I appreciate them as a writer of fiction. An intriguing write.
Akinlolu
Reminds me of the few times I found myself on the wrong end of the barrel.. It's nicely written with an interesting idea..
Sure, I guess you could compare showing your vulnerability to the feeling of being held at gunpoint.
I mean.. Both can do damage.. In different ways, though.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
thank you for your words, Dennis :)
i've been on both sides of the gun... i still am not sure.. read morethank you for your words, Dennis :)
i've been on both sides of the gun... i still am not sure of which one is worse.
i am happy you found it interesting and made you think. thanks again for sharing your opinion, it really means a lot
Your words are powerful and that gun under the chin terrifying. There is always a risk when you open up to someone, that they may abuse your trust. That’s why you have to choose with care. This poem speaks to me in a big way about trust issues. The imagery is memorable. Thank you for sharing.
Chris
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
thank you so much for your words, Chris. I'm glad you liked it :)
20 y/o writter with too many thoughts in her head and emotions in her heart.
i mainly write about love, heartbreak and identity, and i don't know why but i have a weird tendency to mention dark the.. more..