Sunrise Sunfall

Sunrise Sunfall

A Poem by Faust
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Do you ever just sit and watch the sun cross over the horizon?

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I love to watch the sun rise over the horizon bright and pink
Just sitting there watching the sun makes me really think
Why does the sun rise and fall; each time with a different hue?
This is the question I ask myself but I never have a clue
All my life I would just sit and stare
At all the pretty colors in the sky painted everywhere
Pinks, yellows, blues,
All my favorite hues
These colors that I love
Are only found above.

© 2019 Faust


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Faust
Just a fun little poem I wrote

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It's a nice and sweet poem appreciating a natural phenomena.

NICE

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tonight we are waiting for the Great Snowfall to hit the Midwest.. We've been through it before so it doesn't frighten us. We're prepared. But for great beauty we are never "really" prepared. Each time the sun rises it does so in a new sky under the threshold of an old moon. It never gets old....great poem...dana

Posted 5 Years Ago


A beautiful way to describe a glorious sunrise. The colors when the sunrises, the best colors. They're the colors that make me feel warm inside. Great job describing the sunrise, I really felt it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Faust

5 Years Ago

Thank you Mr Mills. I agree. Sunrises always keep me calm when I am upset.
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I've been and I'm fortune to see the sunrise...that first mellow ray! Can't say much bout the sun sets....many times I've stayed awake just to fill my hunger of witnessing sunrise of that day...It's a fun little poem also a refreshing one...Thanks for sharing....be blessed :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


What a nice and adorable poem you have written. The only thing I would suggest is to change is the spelling error in the following line...

All my life I >would< just sit and stare

As a whole, pleasant rhymes as well and gorgeous imagery you have painted. Watching sunrises and sunsets certainly are thrilling and most enjoyable especially when one is able to witness their favorite colors illuminated across the sky.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful use of description. It is cool to watch the dawn or the dust of the day. The many colors. Blessings for us who love the many colors of life. Thank you Emily for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago



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