Tree And Man

Isolation parallel between nature and man

There was a tree
It was tall
It was old
It was frail
There was a man
He was tall
He was old
He was frail
And they were both alone

Author's Note

Not sure about my grammar, or punctuation

Reviews

[FlatLineBeauty]

You can see that the tree and the man found and established a connection in comparison. I liked it

[N.S.J]

It's okay, they both fit well with each other! I liked this poem too! Keep it up! :)

[122hoursoffear]

Thank you so much :)

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Who cares about punctuation. I love it! It is simple, profound, and brilliant. Love when simple words expound so much. Thank you.