Why cant i get away?

its about this young girl who is trying to get away from her boyfriend that keep abusing her and hurting her feelings. She is steady facing challenges that she is trying to get away from.

Why cant i get(got)away?
We moved to Phoenix, Arizona because my mom got a  new job so therefore we moved to Arizona.Well today we moved to  Phoenix,Arizona and I'm going to this new school called St. Peterson Wildcats. The night that we moved there we went into our home that my mom had bought over the internet. It was Saturday that day i woke up in our new house so i went in the kitchen and unpacked our kitchen supplies and put them up because my mom was asleep because all that week she was packing  and  making sure she had enough money for everything we had planned for that last week of July. After I put up everything I had made me and my mom some homemade pancakes and some warm bacon and eggs. My mom finally woken up then i gave her breakfast in bed. 

After my mom had finished her food i had got my $200 to go school shopping before school started because we was a week away til school started. The rest of that day i unpacked and then i took a nap and waked back up ate lunch then went back to unpacking. 

On Friday me and my mom went to the Mall and got me 5 outfit that looked so cute then  we went to a restaurant. Me and my mom went home and went to sleep to get ready for the busy day. The next morning we got ourselves together and my mom drove to St. Peterson Wildcats. I was nervous and this one girl had said " Hi!" I asked her " Do I know you?" She said  "No but i am student aid and wold like to help your mom register you and how you our school in the process on the paperwork." I sad "OK. Do your school have a swimming as a class and had it started?" She said  yes and it just started today after school and the tryouts are fro the rest of this week. I already had my physical because we visited the doctor when we first came to get our   medicine updated and m mom got the physical off the website . I told my mom to pick me up at 5:30 because i was trying out for the swimming team. My mom was running late and this boy came u to and started talking about the dance and did  I have anyone to go with I told him didn't so he said " Would you like t go with me?" I said "Sure." He asked if I needed a ride home. I said "My mom will be here soon." He said" I will wait with you." I said sure." So we waited a while and that's when my mom called and told me that she will not be home until 8 and she will send my grandfather to pick me up. I said "Don't worry i will ride with this boy I just met its okay."  I ask if that ride was still available he said "Sure."  He asked if we can stop off by his house and I said " I'm staying in the car." He said "Are you sure?" I came in with him so he can stop asking so i set on the couch and then he came out with this tight muscle shirt and was turning red  he said " You okay ,you need some water." I said "NO." He said "Lets go then. We left to go to my house and he only lived four blocks. 

Author's Note

This story is not true its just a story that I created it (imagination). What do you think of this story. If you wan to read the next part let me know.

Reviews

[Pax]

its a good start, Eva. This needs a little clean up, needs some spaces between paragraph and dailog... just a little touch up will do... very nice, keep it up!