Falling wrong

so i decided to [ut all the quotes to gether or err.. nah it jus like me talking aboutm y life in a non sad way well, it kinda is but yah.. uh just read.

look out!, her comes an avalanche! 

i run away from the now bad heros, the good guys, my family to say.

i jump---!

falling up from the upside down bouldoser of rocks heading up.

flooooom. i fly.

clouds form fast into a big white and fluffy bunny. re eyes of sun poking through.

"I'll save you, baby!" he says. my life falls under him. im weak, once i look into his eyes.

muahahahahaha

kaploomp.

i fall into a big white hole.

all i see is a big tv screen that fnow fills the whole white room.

its him. the one who gave me weak nees. bad and good guy.

look now! thgey kiss. awe.

i tear.

boomp.

im riding on a bunny

hello there, nice to meet you trees.

Lala land is fun.

pshuwah.

its dark and red.

FIRE.

runing as the avalanche comes. where's the fire?

gone.

hey ther'res a big white snowball coming at me.

why? the setting is a beach, rning hot and the sand burns my feet.

ouch!!

" I love you, babe." he says.

tears.

 now im flooding in a 3 feet pool. Help hep! 

gulp. a fish ate me.

im slimy. this is what a fishes' mouth looks like?

stars  all around me. hello moon.

hay that's saturn. where am i? 

i'm at home on the couch.

kerpunk.

" hi." he says.

my eyes roll back. owie...

my fingers are dissapearing!!!

i'm dissapearing!

" i'll save you!" hey there cousin.

no. don't touch me! 

i'm melting i'm melting!!! 

ding dong./

ice cream? 

no, doorbell.

" I'm back." he says

slam!

i'm inside my feather filled pillow.  sigh.

Snore.

" oh." i say. it wasn't a drem.

my life just past by in this whole minute you read this.

this is my life, you see. it's not like this just alot of idoms and metaphores and personifacations.

goodbye.

*SHUTS OFF CELL PHONE.

whe'red my life go? 

flussshhhh.

nooo my memories!!!

" haha. its stolen, homie." cosin is back./

ergh.

walk out o the fluffy sky door.

Maybe tomorow.

it'll be better.

" hi, finally found you!" he says. do i walk away?!?!?!?!?!

" uh, hello." i say.

" NO not you! herrrr." he growls.

see, told you so.

*end.

Author's Note

yeah tricky hu? you think its gonna end but it reall doesnt a couple of times. it was just something fun to do but it was my life in the 2 minutes you read this. just alot of personifacatins. it'd be cool if you found out what they mean. hahaa

Reviews

[Astrid Hamilton]

You are so creative! This made me smile, and giggle aloud. I feel like a little girl right now. This is a piece of art that should be in a children's book and a lover's reference guide to what dreams and realities are when worlds collide in a rabbit hole. The descriptions and details are so vivid; i felt like I was right there being swallowed by a fish.

You're so cute!

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pretty funny...well thought up

[Daniel]

This is really funny. There were parts that I was like, "What is she saying?" But others that I just wanted to laugh. Lol.

Great job. :)