cos' i realized i love you/

its about my life right now.

cos' you meant so much to me.

cos' you made me smile, when i needed  to cry.

cos' you hugged me when i needed to be alone

cos' when  i realized i  loved  you,  you were gone

cos' when my tears finally came out, you weren't there

cos' when i couldn't stand  being alone, you dissapeared

cos' when i realized i loved you, you were gone.

and cos' when i see you now, and you look at me and smile,

it stabs harder  then physically,

cos' you mean so much to  her,

cos' you make her smile when she wants to cry,

cos' you hug her when she's alone,

cos' she can't even  realze how much you mean to me,

and she doesn't even love you.

Reviews

[reca-becca]

You and I are exactly alike. I'm not even kidding! this poem illustrates in my mind exactly whats up in my life right now. I'm sorry that you have to share that awful pain with me too. but it's kinda good to know that your not alone right? I feel better knowing that somone else out there has the same problems as me. excellent poem. keep writting.
love,
reca-becca
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

[Jaeda]

I'm so sad after reading this I can't write anything constructive... Sorry.

[turtlegirlluver]

I really liked this, I can relate to. There was one guy I liked, but kinda brushed me off, but I still couldn't get over him even after he found someone else. This captures your emotions very well, I hope things get better for you! Good write!

"cos' you meant so much to me.
cos' you made me smile, when i needed to cry.
cos' you hugged me when i needed to be alone
cos' when i realized i loved you, you were gone"

Loved that part!

[sisyqueen2008]

i feel ya girl. one time i broke up with someone that means so much to me, and he doesn't realize that i'm the one he should be with. oh yeah good write. :)