The Magicians

The Magicians

A Story by Eidolon Michael
"

Three magicians, but only one can rule them all.

"

There were three magicians,each with their own powers.

Sora could control the weather.

Raiden could control the elements.

Mizu could control the moon and sun's appearance.

One day,the three got into an argument over which was the best.

"To control the weather is to control chaos itself!"Sora claimed.

"Wrong!To control the elements is to control the world!"Raiden said proudly.

Mizu did not say anything,but instead removed the sun.

"Without the sun,you cannot master heat,"Mizu said to Raiden,"And without heat,there can be no rain,"Mizu added to Sora.

"Rain is the main cause of weather.You are inferior,"Mizu dictated and Sora,defeated,disappeared from the world.

"I can still control the elements!"Raiden said.

Mizu then removed the moon as well as the sun.The world was covered in complete darkness now.

"Without light,even YOU cannot do anything,"Mizu dictated and Raiden,defeated,disappeared from the world.

Though Mizu was the victor of the three magaicians,Zeit,the master of time,had waited in slumber.He now appeared before Mizu.

"You believe yourself superior but time controls you!"Zeit declared and he trapped Mizu in time forever.

Zeit was the real victor.

You cannot defeat time.

© 2010 Eidolon Michael


Author's Note

Eidolon Michael
A random story that I thought of during math one day lol It's old so please forgive me if it sucks

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I like the names. It was a little longer than the other ones, but I didn't feel it was as good as the rest. Not too much of a moral like I was hoping, but that's probably my own fault for expecting. XD Well, maybe there is, if one takes "You cannot defeat time" to a deeper level, but meh. Still not too bad though.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Oo, I found this story very interesting! I had to read it twice, but it was still overall awesome! :D I thought that it was well written, and had a great plot! I really enjoyed reading your story! It was fantastic! :D

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Posted 15 Years Ago



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My name is Michael and I am 18 years old. I'm a pretty nice guy(mostly) but if I don't like you, I'll tell you so,yeah.I'm really short for a guy (5ft, 6in.) and I'm pretty average weight(125lbs).. more..

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