Chapter 1

Michael is living with four others sides of himself.Pretty good,right?Wrong!

"So,Michael,explain to me again,you simply push second,matrix,go over once-"

 

"Twice,"Michael corrected Daniel.

 

"Whatever!"Daniel answered,"So,go over twice push 'Enter',put in the demons-"

 

"Dimensions-"

 

"Shut up!" Daniel stood up and threw the calculator down and ran over to Ralph,who was sitting slumped on the couch,channel surfing.

"Come on!Let's play patty-cake!"Daniel whined.

"No,"Ralph answered lazily.

"Please?"

 "No."

"Please?"

"No!"

"Daniel,he said 'No',"Michael intervened.

"But I wanna play!"Daniel whined, sounding like he was five instead of sixteen.

"Go read a book."

"Ew,"Ralph said looking at MIchael in disgust,"I can't believe you just said that!"

"You want him to keep bothering you?"

"No!"

"Then quit complaining!"

"Guys,be quiet!"Roran demanded,sitting at the kitchen table,writing his Document Based question(DBQ for short) frantically."You're stressing me out-"

"If that's possible,"Michael muttered.

"Obviously it is,"Ralph whispered.

"Leave me alone!" Roran wailed, picking up his work,notebooks,pencils, and bag and running to his room.

"What.A.Baby,"Daniel said,playing with Ralph's hiar.

"Would you stop?" Ralph asked him.

"I don't wanna!"

"Please?"

"Noooo!!"

"ALL OF YOU SHUT UP!!" Daniel squealed and ran under the table.Ralph picked up a couch cushion and hid behind it.Michael looked into the kitchen where Dante stood,looking absoulutely frightening.

"I AM TRYING TO COOK!!"

"Calm down,"Michael suggested.

"Noooo!!"

"Well,quit yelling."

"Ok..."Dante admitted defeat and went back to cooking dinner.

"He's scary,"Daniel said,crawling out from under the table.

"You think everything's scary,"Ralph pointed out.

"So?"

 "So quit being a loser,"Ralph yawned.

"I'm not a loser!"

"Yes you are."

"Nu-uh!"

"Yeah-huh!"

"No I'm not!"

"Yes you are."

"Be quiet,you two,"Michael ordered.Ralph and Daniel ignored him.Michael sighed.They were always fighting.

"DINNER'S READY!!"

"Dante,I asked you to quit yelling."

"Get over it,"Dante answered,stepping out of the kitchen with bowls.Ralph looked at the food in disgust.

"This looks gro-"

BAM!!

"Wanna finish that?"Dante asked dangerously.

"O-of course not.Wouldn't dream of it,"Ralph answered with swirly eyes.

"What is it?"Roran asked as he sat on the couch with the others.

"Goulash,"Dante said proudly.

"Ew,"everyone groaned.

"WHAT DID YOU ALL JUST SAY?!"

Everyone scattered.

"Dante,the yelling!" Michael pointed out,dodging a fist.

"GET OVER IT!!"

"RUNAWAY!!"

"EVERYONE STOP YELLING!!"

Just a typical day at home.

Author's Note

New version of this chapter with proper format ^_^ Only took like 3 minutes ^_^ Enjoy

Reviews

[Druella]

I am curious on where this might lead. I would have liked a bit more of something to give me some idea as to what is going on here. The only thing I know is that one of them is 16, though both Ralph and Daniel seem to be portrayed as 3 year olds and they don't really break that except for those few brief lines at the beginning. I would love to see more insight on either your characters or the plot you are going for. Something to pull a reader in.

[unspokenguilt]

Lol, very hysterical!

I could imagine that it's a very chaotic style of living...if i was living with the other mes i wouldn't doubt that one of them would end up choking the other, heheheh
Great Write
:) elyssa

[Lady leah]

Very nicely penned great write. can't what to read the next one.

[Fallen Angel]

Really good can't wait to read the next chapter.