Dark Eyes

      You used to have light eyes,

      Filled with joy and no pain,

      Now all i can see in them is black.

      I know how much you loved him.

      I know how much you want him

      Back, but he's gone. He is six feet

      Under, he's gone. We all want him back,

      The entire south side, but he's gone.

      We all miss him, but he's gone. And we'll

      All remember him in our hearts. He will

      Forever be in our hearts, in our souls.

      And we will never forget him, he will

      Be in our hearts untill the day we die,

      untill our last breath, sirtenly in yours.

      And we offer our support, untill your rid

      Of your dark eyes.

 

 

Author's Note

Please comment on how i can improve my poetry. i am twelve so keep the comments appropriate to my age group. Thx!