Pressure

Jared Podsednik 5/30/12  2:23pm 

Take one more look and don't worry about me, because I'm headed to the valley for the last time I'll be at the end of the cliff taking a look at what I wanted to be, before I'm free suddenly I see everything that could of been my dream, crushed instantly by the weight you put on me, take one more look and don't worry about me, because I'm headed to the valley one more time, to  catch my breath before I leap, suddenly I see your love you were hiding from me.            

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

to catch my breath
before I leap.
Nice write.