Saddest Times

Do I dear,

To see you there,

With this sharp blade,

covered in the reddest blood,

Love,

It's all you needed from these scars,

Honey you've come to far,

Honey you're dying,

Please don't go,

Stop lying Lord,

She's not done,

She will find love,

Maybe in me?

Can't you see.

Reviews

[JC]

I dig it, dark and haunting, crushing and a bit murderous...perfect for Halloween ...

[Emmy Cannon]

Lol Thanks. Didn't really mean it like that but it kind of does go with it.

[DarkestStoryline]

Your writing makes me feel as if I'm the one who the poem is written for, which is good. The style is nice as well as the meaning.

[Emmy Cannon]

Thank you! I write for everyone who has ever felt like this or has even been through it. I hope to write more just for you!

[DarkestStoryline]

No problem, and thanks.

[Emmy Cannon]

No problem :)

[Steph]

This is really beautifully written! Perhaps I am reading into it a different way, but maybe the 'dear' in the first line should be 'dare' ? A really good bit of poetry overall!

[Emmy Cannon]

Thank you! And no I wrote the dear there so it gives off the more feminist way. Its confusion to some but understandable to most. Thank you tho!

[benita]

Beautiful poem. You're writing is just lovely.

[Emmy Cannon]

Thank you very much :)