Wash Me Away

 

My hips are impressed like the silent shore

under your unwavering ebb and flow

 

Your ungranted tide assults my sand,

every grain a prisoner caressed in salty seduction

 

Replacing dipped toes and giddy giggles

is my soft sigh, lost in the breeze of your greedy eyes

 

In that moment of you stealing everything I am

I long to hate you with the passion of thunder

 

But like this tide, your chest charmingly falls and rises

with the beat of my stolen heart

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

so beautiful, this gave me chills!

[rivers]

Lovely poignant emotions...Your vivid picturesque metaphors ignite the heart and soul...10 of the finest lines I've read...

[brigid]

this is a georgous rich tapestry of words and emotions...so much goodness in a poem. thank you

[Bare trees]

Beautiful metaphors. The last line is a winner. Great poem.

[Distant horizons]

passionate, sensual, wonderful.

ps... i'd say more, but I think that's all that needs to be said. :-)