Bless this family :)

This is a poem about my little family

Bless This family
for there is only two.
Is it broken?
Maybe to you.
To me my family is whole
Even if its not three.
But not all things
Are cut out to be.

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[Kieta!]

I love the way this is written! It flows so nicely and I like the message :) Great job!!

[Jem Sagcal]

It speaks so much despite the length. It shows that no matter how short the poem, it may tell a lot. Love this.

[Dr. Wood ?]

tells a lot in a short space, speaks volumes for the two of you, I feel....Very good