am not about to change

my random thoughts

on my face the sun shines yellow rays,
up in the sky my hands i raise,
my bank account is empty,
empty like my potiticians promises,
my heath is great ,
great like the wall of china,
pretend like you care,
busy to default and leave
easy to see fault in me,
you in the same mess,
but you are blind to that,
am the horse you cant tame,
the code you cant crack,
the drink you cant sip,
the light you cant see,
am not about to change

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

courage to be oneself is a hurdle all must deal with .. some people never accept themselves and we all loose as a result ..we loose the stars inside us all! :) honest thoughts from an honest poet :)
E.

[alifeacoustic]

Not changing is the most precious thing we can give ourselves. In light and in dark, good times and bad, we must be true to ourselves and get through whatever is in front of us, on our own terms. If we can look back at our mistakes and learn from them, but also know that we were true to ourselves, then what more can we ask.
Some great lines in here, with a good build up and flow to your words. Thank you for sharing with us.

[Blu]

interesting but a little dark