Sceney Bean

Sceney Bean

A Poem by 30SecondsToRawr
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I'm a Sceney Bean,

my hair is bright pink,

so i think

you're a queer

 

 

 

 

I'm sick of this place,

and your smelly face,

GOML,

you understand?

My wrists,

Ow....

My wrists.

© 2011 30SecondsToRawr


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top notch chum! 100% on the scoresheets!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is funny. Scene kids with pink hair do tend to look sideways at everyone else... little grammar correction: It should be your not you're. The last three lines are kind of funny, but I wasn't sure if I should be laughing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the last part about your wrists, but the rest of it doesn't really make sense...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 11, 2011
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