behind my eyes
A Poem by annie lee
regret
runs in rivulets
down
inside me.
the
illusion of my life
dissolves
to reveal
a
clumsy skeleton
that
mocks me
with
mediocrity.
© 2015 annie lee
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A amazing short poem. You said a lot in so few words. I liked the honest tone lading to the honest ending. Mediocrity is the ending when we fall to false illusions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
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9 Years Ago
You are welcome.
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A amazing short poem. You said a lot in so few words. I liked the honest tone lading to the honest ending. Mediocrity is the ending when we fall to false illusions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
You are welcome.
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Added on August 14, 2015
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annie leePrunedale, CA
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I'm a tough old broad who spent almost 30 years at Ma Bell, and that is high level training for surviving in the jungle. Thank you for your patience.
I am retired from the Unix and Linux world, but w.. more..
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