fit

fit

A Poem by annie lee

 

big wooden puzzles

tiny pudgy fingers

struggling to find the piece

that fits

fingers grow

no longer tentative

but still struggling

to find the piece

that fits

 

© 2014 annie lee


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so little said! but it speaks volumes. delightful.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creative idea, brief but nicely described. Very nice

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creative idea, brief but nicely described. Very nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pieces fit together for certain reasons, others don't. Puzzles are that way too...A splendid poem...:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is our fingers that give our brains most of its agency. I feel the pain in this write. Brava.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is full of imagery and double meanings. A real delight.:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 5, 2014
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Tags: life, puzzles

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annie lee
annie lee

Prunedale, CA



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I'm a tough old broad who spent almost 30 years at Ma Bell, and that is high level training for surviving in the jungle. Thank you for your patience. I am retired from the Unix and Linux world, but w.. more..

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