tanka 16

 

make impossible

promises, wild passionate

promises; and i

won’t hold you to them.  it’s good

merely to hear promises.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, it is.....we can hitch our stars to a promise, can't we? Well written Tanka. Lydi**

[annie lee]

Thank you, Lydia.

[Sami Khalil]

Promise that you keep writing good poems like this one...Bravo...:>)..............

[annie lee]

I'll try, Sami. Thanks for your kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:>)