haiku 12

 

the harvest moon hangs

in the sooty sky, bathing

earth in golden light

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

And I am there ..... beautiful !

Well done ... Jazz :)

[annie lee]

Thank you. I have loved haiku since I learned of it as a senior in high school. Of course, for many years I ignored the Japanese rules for content and was roundly criticized for it. I do endeavor to stay with in the lines more now.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I think you have mastered it .. I do Haiku also now and then .... You r welcome !!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. You said a lot in so few words. A outstanding haiku.
Coyote

[annie lee]

Thank you. Haiku is one of my favorite forms. Since my style is rather stark and unadorned, it seems to work well for me sometimes.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This is a lovely Haiku, and perfect reading for the season!

[annie lee]

Thank you so much. This is one I wrote when I was still working. A late departure from the office allowed me to catch this site on my commute home. I remember having many ideas for haiku when driving home. No dull places in Monterey when one opens the eye of heart and mind.

[Ed Rector]

well done paints a pic with words

[annie lee]

Thank you. Haiku works well for that,

[Latifa]

loved it 3 lines with greater depth

[annie lee]

Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Hmm not sure how to read this one annie lee, rise above the soot and chaos and let the sunshine in perhaps.

[Sami Khalil]

A very descriptive and soothing light...:)

[annie lee]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Sami Khalil]

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