tanka 11

tanka 11

A Poem by annie lee

 

soft cherry blossoms


barely pink, crazily gnarled


cypress trees, misty


monterey morning, long gray


fog fingers caress the bay

 

© 2013 annie lee


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I really like the imagery you created - one can easily picture your words. The scheme and the words were chosen with care, I think. Good one.

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annie lee
annie lee

Prunedale, CA



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