the sea of darkness

he speaks but has no voice

he crys but has no tears

hes there, but you cant see him

he is more then what he appears to be

theres a viel over his face

hidden behind the darkness

a slave trying to escape

a voiceless, invisible puppet

to the human race

he writes letters to the woe 

and preaches the the weak 

but his smile is for show

an empty space is what he claims to be

drowning in the water

hanging from a rope

barly breathing

yet, stories of hope

because, there still light in the stars

that means he can see

and the birds still flutter

happly...

but  the viel wont let go..

dispite his pleads

so he crys everynight

for you to help him

but hes afraid hes to deep

drowning in this dark sea

Reviews

[symmetryAsymmetry]

Your work is amazing...i read a number of your poems and really loved them...keep sharing :)

[Siren]

this is an incredibly accurate description of how i've lived most my life. your writing reminds me that some things are felt by everyone, in some measure or another.

[Gianna Y]

I do believe we have another Edgar Allan Poe on our hands.

[Gianna Y]

*cough cough* Minus the craziness though.. Hehee

[Empty Spaces]

lolzzzz i loveith him!

[Sami Khalil]

Other than grammatical issues it was sooo good...:)..................

[Sahara M.]

your writing is so damn deep

[Empty Spaces]

why thank you :) lolzz