letter to a new shadow

letter to a new shadow

A Poem by Empty Spaces

the shadows of the past

follow me werever i dwell

it haunts me, oh how i hide in this shell

sobbing

why shadow, do you hurt me?

and cause me to bleed?

why shadow, i beg dont hurt me

please....just leave

© 2013 Empty Spaces


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r
This is really short, but really pretty. And I can relate a lot. I especially love how you have sobbing as one line. It adds a little...punch to it, I suppose. Lovely, and painful. I like it,(:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Empty Spaces

11 Years Ago

well thank you :)
r

11 Years Ago

you're welcome

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Empty Spaces

The Hole Across The Street, FL



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