life goes on

a song

tears falling from your eyes.

tired, hurt from from the lies.

no matter how hard you try.

there in control of there life.

the sun keeps setting.

the world keeps turning.

the burn they've felt.

its not worth hurting.

so help, help.

this stormy, cloudy soul.

for you are all i know.

and i hold on, hold on. stay strong.

i walk all day, and rest at night

but earth keeps turning. and it's

blurring my sight.  

Reviews

[Kitt]

I like the theme of the poem. You've diffinitely have some talent.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

These are wonderful lyrics and I think this would make a great song. The pain and sense of loss is something most can relate to.

[ObscurityNone]

Short & Sweet. I'm interested in how it would sound.